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by patty

person Anon
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh u definitely need to wrie more maybe get some b/a action in there but u continue with ur story i fu dont wanna im justig fig fan of them together anyways its really good
person Samolly
schedule December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That Magic Box scene was HOT!!!!!!!!!!
person ancientgirl
schedule December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yes, please continue! I had hoped however that the stranger lurking outside the window would catch the show.
person Azrielle
schedule December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is great. I'm glad you'rre posting this here.
person tasslehoff
schedule December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice twist, with Xander being supportive. That's a new take. I like it.