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for Goodbye To You

by patty

person Natalie
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I thought your 2nd chapter was beautifully heady and your 1st chapter was just plain beautiful! I love the description and very few people can write in a certain way that makes reading NC-njoynjoyable. Okay well it is enjoyable in that smutty way... but a good storyline is also appreciated.
person Azrielle
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent story. Please keep writing them. I love the ones that make me cry.
person Anon
schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is great! update soon!
person Nikki
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me she stops him, or follows him to bring him back!
person Azrielle
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That totally made me cry!!!! you have to update this soon. Please I love it. It was so sad.
person ancientg? !
schedule September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please update this soon. What a wonderful chapter. I can't wait to read her reaction.