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for Cat's Outta the Bag

by missmishka

person Ladyluck523
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Smut....smut is of the good!
It's especially good when well written and set into an emotional context. A hot episode (what girl doesn't dream about ripping the shirt off Spike ;) ) that you've made even hotter!
Great job and looking forward to spuffy smuttiness :)
person Ladyluck523
schedule December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update!
I've been enjoying this fic since I think it's a charming and realistic buildup of their relationship. I also think the reactions of the Scoobies so far are on the mark. Excellent! I can't wait to see where you're going with this fic but continue what you're doing!
person Jen
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story.
person shippy
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
And I say more more more.
person Sarah Aless
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG What a place to leave it!!!!!!!!!!
Hilarious, poor Dawn's eyes, poor Spike and Buffy are they ever gonna get to finish???
Can't tell you how much I want more of this :D
Sarah
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person Celia
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I don't like how mean Spike was to Xander when all the poor guy was trying to do was warn Buffy that her life was in danger. Made Spike look like a real asshat.
person patty
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I also hope it doesn't take long. This is a great story.
person Sarah Aless
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
k, don't want to start a war here but I think Spike's attitude to Xander was hilarious.
Spike always takes the piss out of Xander, so to my mind it was great characterisation (eg when Spike was in Xanders basement in Season4 they were always at each other and Spike always sneers at him.)
Keep it up - thats exactly how I would have seen Spike react to Xander - he never did like him.
Sarah
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person Sarah Aless
schedule December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Still loving this, great chapter - you gave really good visuals on Xander.
Glad theres more to come
Sarah
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person Sarah Aless
schedule December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YUMMY!!!!!!!!!!
So glad you updated this. Can't wait to see what happens now.
Sarah
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