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by Sylver

person Pluto
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"All a strong woman really wants is to be raped", right? Wrong. Either get your head out of your ass, even if it feels good to have it there, or stick it even further up so you suffocate.
person Anon
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Romance-rape? ROMANCE-RAPE?

I can understand control fantasies, I can understand consensual non-con (saying no, meaning yes, having a safeword), but there is NO SUCH THING as romance rape.

Rape is about control, not love. Please never ever use this term again.
person ingvild
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
There. Is. No. Such. Thing. As. Romance-rape.

Romance is about love, or at least lots of like, and feeling good, and wanting your partner to feel good.

Rape is about dominance, and wanting to feel big on someone else's expence.

Strike this word from your vocabulary, and the notion from your brain, and maybe you can be allowed to show people your writing again.
person Zoe
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Massively out of character on both sides. So-called erotic writing that left me feeling as though I'd just taken a ice cold shower. And let's not even get into the blatent lack of understanding of the female psyche. Do not pass go. Do not collect $200. Also, at one point you have Faith reaching for her faithful "steak".
person Visp
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ridiculous, stupid and unlike anything either of them would do.
person Thewlis
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, gee, look. Yet another fic where the ever strong, ever insane Faith turns into a weepy version of herself that would be more comfortable in Pride and Prejudice. I'm slowly losing faith in humanity.
Cheers.
person Mike
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The Principal's name is Robin Wood, not Oliver Wood. I think someone's been reading Harry Potter!