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for Pillow Fight

by Shanastay

person tasha
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is sooo good. its all fluffy and happy.
more please
person shippy
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like the story but I don't see the problem with foot action. I think I may safely say that the people who read fics here are not susceptible to be shocked by someone licking toes, lol. Actually I find this hang up rather silly. I'm glad Spike didn't mention butt action, lol...
person sammygirl
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey loved the fic i love the 2 points of view im usually not into that but you have converted me forever!!!

all i can say is bring on the next chapter!
person Jen
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So good! Yes please do continue!
person Sarah Aless
schedule November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written, entertaining erotic and quite simply wonderful.
I LOVED this (can you tell)
Hope theres lots more where this came from.
Sarah
x
person Jen
schedule November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was hot. Keep up the good work! And thanks for the heads up on the feet part of the story!! I'm hoooked on this and can't wait to read more!
person LadyLiz
schedule November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! LOL! A very nice silly, sweet soon to be very smutty (at tleast I REALLY hope so) fict. Can't wait for more!!