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for Pillow Fight

by Shanastay

person Reader
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Here, inflate your head a notch: I'd like to read more.
person LuckyStarz
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw...that was so cute!! I wouefinefinitely like to see more of this! This was absolutely adorable! You write fluff very well, and I think you should continue with this.
Much love!
person Heather Holt
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ego-related big-headedness? I'll show you eog related big-headedness...I like what you've written and I ask that you please continue. *hugs*
person LuckyStarz
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Liked how you turned it into Spike's POV this time around. I think I'd like to see this as a fluffy piece. You write fluff so well! Plus, there are so many angst-y stories out there, it's hard to find a really great author, such as yourself, who can just write pure fluff. Makes me go all warm and fuzzy when I read stlikelike this. It's really beautiful. Of course, in the end, it's up to you what you decide to do. I'm sure it'll turn out wonderfully no matter what. Just keep going and I'll be happy!
Much love!
person Carmen
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was totally diff!! i loved it! u should add another ch.! i really enjoyed reading it and i kno thr wrr wrking on other stuff, but it would b great if u updated this one.
person Carmen
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
heheheheheheheh. i liked it better for lord of the rings...................mmmm legolas.
person Sewer-dweller
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
lol
Thanks luv.
So glad I could inspire others to great dirty mindedness. =D
That was bloody brillant luv.
Short and sweet, and damn impressive.
I give this an F for Fun-fucking-tastic.
More more more with a please on top. =D
Lates luv.
Am ^_^
person tasha
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is such a good fic. very smutty very sexy
person Lolita
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow this was certainly a hot little chapter to a hot story!

I love this story I must say, it has the characters dead on and is enjoyable to read. I can't wait to read more, hopefully soon.

Happy Holidays!

Lolita
person Jen
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love this story :) They're so cute together