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hey i just wanted to tell you how much i loved you fic its a great plot with a great twist i would have never guessed it! i love it dont stop your doing great ignore those bad reviews they have no idea what a great fic this is going to be!

Please don't let Faith put her hands on spike.

I had to stop reading at the first chapter. I read some of the reviews and then I decided to give the story a go. It could really use some work on the grammar. Especially with omitted words that would make it easier to follow. But I just did not get the love scene. It was pretty vulgar but no realy flow.

All i can say is WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW, this is BRILLIANT keep going please

First let me say that I think the story is very good. I like the plot and characters. But I don't think I'm being rude by saying that your punctuation, grammar and spelling need a little work. I commend you for having the talent to write and the courage to put your story out here where people can read it. Not all negative criticism is bad. You need to learn from it and don't ever give up, if writing is what makes you happy. The more you write, the better you will become. Flames are one thing, but honest, constructive criticism is another. I do like the story and I think you have alot of potential to become an excellent writer.

I love this story. There's always something so exciting about the forbidden. I hope you plan to keep updating. Look ard ard to reading more.

I dunno if this is sick or funny or just kinda hot. I loved the first chap and with the whole 16 thing, I guess its not sick I loved it when Buffy and Angel were togther at just 17 so whateva, go ahead and let them get it on.

Awesome he he Finding nemo

Omg that is of thf the funniest things I have ever read. It really good. Nice smutt, but it was also funny. I loved it . Update soon. It was great.

Hey! Cool new story! Like it a lot lol. Update soon!