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for The Deal

by ORJeepgrl

person kathypg
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good start to this story. Up soo soon.
person lolita
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness what a fabulous piece of work, it had me enthralled with the first sentence, please, please please continue, I so would love to read more on this.
person Me
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MORE, MORE MORE!!
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this so far. Iit's well written and I'm very interested to see where you're going to go with it. Please update soon.
Sarah
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person Laura
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
nice start!
person Azrielle
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So far I love it. The idea is very cool. Please add more soon.
person Liz
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow! Awesome so far! I can't wait to read more!!!!!
person Lucidity
schedule November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Liking it so far......Please Update soon!!
person nettie
schedule November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
so far so good...you've got me interested...but please don't drag it out to much...you could think about your spacing make it a bit easier to read...please update soon.