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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good start please continue!
SB
SB
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
loving the fic <3 please continue soon!
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November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, that?s some of the hot stuff you write. I just wished the chapters to be a little longer and I wouldn?t mind if you
took some time for a more detailed description. But you can also just throw this review into the trash and go on as you like,
just keep on going, please.
took some time for a more detailed description. But you can also just throw this review into the trash and go on as you like,
just keep on going, please.
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November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good...I'm glad Spike can't keep away...and now a mystery observer...but your quite right the chapter was way too short...more please soon.
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November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
all i want for christmas is angel's re-act-ion - sing it with me now!!! definately loving it! keep going, i NEED more - just fabulous
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November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi! This is a great story so far. Does he stay for Buffy or does he go and we have to read avidly through chapters of angst? I can't wait to find out! Great suspense...can't wait to see who spotted them either!
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November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it. More soon please!!!
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November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is amazing one of the best ive read so far
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November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a good concept, but it needed a little more build up to the actual sex. And it also needs some more details. I'd also recommend a different beta, because there are quite a few punctuation errors that really draw a reader out of the flow.
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November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! I love the turnabout. When Spike comes to his senses, please make him work for Thi This story is just a total treat! Thanks so much. And, of course, more!