rate_review Reviews

Excellent. Dxxoo

I liked the plot of this story a lot. I liked how Xander was really freaked out about the sexual feelings
he was having for Spike. Being a Spike/Buffy fan, I really liked the Spike/Buffy aspect here, it was
well ten.ten. Your characterization was right on. The dialogue was perfect. It was right on for what the
characters do and say. I felt I was watching a Buffy ep characterization wise. That being said, there were times that I was a little confused as to what was going on, there were parts that could've been written a little clearer.
And in the last chapter (8) I noticed that the tenses changed back and forth from past to present tense.

Overall, I think this story is really good, and it kept me interested. Hope to see more from you.

I think you have a valid plot but the story doesn't reallyexplain enough. I mean Buffy was just a little too easy. Why does everyone want Spike.(besides the obvious)

Very smutty...very good...update soon...Please.

Spuffy makes me yawn, but you weave the stories nicely.

OoooOOoo! I love it! Please write more of your lovely sneaky spike and nervous xander! Sure, okay, this review doesn't make sense but ...the emotion is real! More, please!

Hey, this is pretty good stuff.

You're hardly ever awkward or ungrammatical, which is quite remarkable in the realm of fanfiction.

I'm enjoying it.

great begining...please write more soon...i really like your crafty spike...i'm sure it's going to be fun when he gets his naughty way...update soon!