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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad your computer is fixed! Please continue!
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January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it very much!
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
more more more! it's great!
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really recommend a beta reader. There are a lot of punctuation and spelling errors. Also, let each person have their own line for dialogue. When you put two parts of dialogue on one line, it gets messy for the reader.
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is shaping up to be a really good story. I really like the pace of it....I didn't even notice the handcuff/clothes problem (and I usually pick up on stuff like that) because it was moving along so smoothly. Please update soon....can't wait to see what happened to Buffy.
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November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter but far too short. Sorry to say it was a bit spoiled by all the gramma errors. needs brushing up a bit.
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November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like the idea for the story. I had read stories where Spike and Buffy where forced together but the handcuffs idea is just brilliant. Can't wait for more!!
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November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. More please.
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November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i really like it so far...write faster!!!! but not to the detriment of the story...so maybe take your time? i'm looking forward to reading more...
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November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
New chapter - yay! I like where you are taking this. I was afraid it was going to be another lock Buffy and Spike up to form a breeding program story. (Not that I don't love those) It was a great surprise to see this go in such a different direction. I can't wait to see what other surprises you bring us. Thank's.