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for The Real Riley Finn

by PatchesJ

person lindsay
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, awesome! I never get tired of reading fictions in which Riley gets his ass kicked! Chained up naked in a dungeon is a nice touch too, of course. Update soon!
person Karen
schedule November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story. Bad Riley.... make him pay. Please continue
person Kari Mouke
schedule November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I was confused at the way you wrote it, however. It often read almost like a script. Some people need to present their work in that form because they do not have the gift of prose. You are not one of those people. You write well when you allowrselrself. Thank you for the story.
person Nicky
schedule November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yep, knew Spike would come through in the end!

Ha ha, loved it.

Good one. Write another!!

It's good to read of Spike as the good guy, coz he is being a bit stupid and cruel in mine at the minute (non-intentiaonlly of course)

Thanks xx
person Nicky
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Liking it so far...

I'm not too into Riley, although i don't hate him. Spike is my boy through and through, so i'm feeling the love.

Keep going!

Nicky
person ancientgirl
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well I'm right there with you on the hating Riley thing. I never liked him as a character, and I never liked him for Buffy. I'm glad Joyce is so accepting of Spike and Buffy, its something I think would have happened. She was always so willing to give Spike a chance when nobody else was.

Please update soon.