rate_review Reviews

This is a good story. Very interesting with a good plot. The spelling mistakes are a bit annoying and some of the conversations between the characters are a little "choppy". The dialog doesn't flow like it should. That said, I think you should continue to write because you do have talent and practice makes perfect they say. I'm looking forward to an update.

I have only just found your story I like it very much it makes you want to cry for them .I hope you update soon I am very intersted in how you will resolve all this I thinkyou have a great talent for drama please make the chapters longer , i like your detail

What a wonderful story! I can't wait to see what happens next!

I really like this so far, and can't wait for more.

Please update as soon as possible. Are you gonna bring Spike back? And if you do, are the Scoobies finally gonna accept him? I hope so. Anyway, keep up the great work.
NEO

dude, i'm liking the goes of your story , but i think you need a BetaReader, you have some serious spelling mistakes , i would offer but i kinda suck at spelling too so i wouldn't be a safe bet.