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for Who's Afraid?

by sarahaless

person ReignOfDarkness
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Keep that up and you'll have something much bigger than your delicate little finger in your mouth before long little girl." Oh my god, I seriously just creeeamed my pants. Fuck! That was hot, my god, I didn't think it possible but we have even more similar tastes then we first thought. I have been DYING to read or write a fic of her in the Little Red Riding costume, ever since she wore it that time on Halloween ... fuck that was intensely hot ... oh god ...
person ReignOfDarkness
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god YOU ARE AMAZING! I have been wanting a fic like this for so long! Hahaha fuck I can't believe how alike we are!
person Allison
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good and hot.
person jula
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"but mr. wolf, you can see my panties!"...

CLASSIC!!!

god i loved this story... i love to sex like this...it's a lot of fun... fwahhhh... i loved the biting bit...

you rock girl...write more stuff
person wanda
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sara I have only just discovered your work You do s&m very well The first two chapters were very cute and flawless but yes the chat at the end was a little anticlamactic. Why not just let her stay in character and play the game out as red riding hood I have faith that you can can bring the next part(s) into play without needless out of game discussion. Waiting for your next part wanda
person MsSpikester
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very fitting ending....fabulous!!!! Great story, Thanks!
person Karen
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
No, not bad.. good... very good. Sorry to see it go. I loved how Buffy made him run after her, CLASSIC
person patty
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Twas was great. I need a cold shower (or three) to recover. Very sexy and
very funny. Looking forward to your next one.

Patty
person nettie
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great story...loved all the playful smut...maybe you should do a sequal using beauty and the beast as your theam i'm sure it would be good fun.
person Anon
schedule November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Fairly good ending. It's a bit weird when he calls her a sod.