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November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that last part was s:( C:( Come back with more soon. I'm dying to know what happens next. Buffy better go after him!
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November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow. and again, i say wow! that was a good story. i beg of you, don't stop. keep this story going, it is very well-written, and it deserves to be praised and lauded, along with you, the author. this is an excellent story, and i really do hope that you continue. well, have fun, and keep writing more fics!
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November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I love it, like every story you wrote!!! I can?t wait to read more. The Spike in your storys is great, always passionate and intense! Love it!!! Please more soon!!!
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November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Complaints? Yeah, why did you stop! I love where this is going, please update soon!
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November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay......I can't think of anything else, but........Yay!! (oh, and more please!)
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November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. You are so good with the erotic storytelling. I love the Spike of your stories. This story is wonderful.
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November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh crap, I didn't lihis,his, but I know there will be some major Spuffy action soon, so I'll just calm down and cross my fingers and hope you update immediately.
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November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You don't like the story at all? Or you didn't like the last chapter?
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November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You didn't use a ton of words, but you created a scene so real and erotic that I can't wait for more. Could so totally see them doing such a wonderful dance. The dialogue was bang-on, all the characters acted just as I thought they should and Buffy's comment on Xander's wardrobe was hillarious. You interspursed one of my favorite songs with the story in a fine dance all on it's own and I'm not usually crazy about song fics. If this is what you can do with a simple dance scene, can't wait until you get them into bed, if they make it that far, the motorcycle does have many possibilities.
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November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*blink* Ohh wow, uhmm wow. GREAT job! You've GOT to update more! WONDERFUL song choice by the way! And Bugettgetting all posessive about Spike when the girls were talking about him was great! MORE PLEASE!!