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August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. Very interesting fic you've got here. I am anxious to see where you take it.
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January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Meeting? Between whom I wonder... No B/A, PLEASE!!! I'll still read this anyway if you do, but it takes a lot for me to even stomach the thought of Angle and Buffy together. Though she's not really "Buffy" here, huh? The thing were Faith feels like she's living somebody else's life is pretty sly of you. I give you props. More Spike please, and _PLEASE_ don't let him kill Faith!!!!! ~flamey
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your premise is really interesting. I don't believe I have read any fanfiction quite like this one. It has certainly gotten me hooked. I am lng fng forward to the next chapter.
One thingugh,ugh, you put too many commas in your sentences. It makes the sentences choppy. Better too few commas than too many. At least that is my opinion.
Really great over-all! Imagination is way more important than grammar anyday!!!
One thingugh,ugh, you put too many commas in your sentences. It makes the sentences choppy. Better too few commas than too many. At least that is my opinion.
Really great over-all! Imagination is way more important than grammar anyday!!!
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December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see what aforementioned "job" is. I hope Spike's in soon. Like, in the next 3 or 4 chapters soon. Great fic, more soon. ~flamey
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December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very intreguing!
I'm dying to read more of this. Your style of writing drew me in from the very begining. For the first time I'm not really bothered about the spuffy content of the story. You're doing marvellously. More soon please.
I'm dying to read more of this. Your style of writing drew me in from the very begining. For the first time I'm not really bothered about the spuffy content of the story. You're doing marvellously. More soon please.
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November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
sounds pretty good so far... wanna see whats gona come next though....
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November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
There's already a long, popular Spuffy Wishverse story named "Brave New World"--in fact, it's archived at this site. You might want to rename your story to avoid confusion.
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November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Omg, B's gonna be working for the Bad Guys?! I don't think I've EVER read something like this before! Please continue soon!!! ~flamey
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November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning... now I can only hope that the rest of it will be of the same quality or better, and hopefully without having to wait any great length of time.