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for Speak No Evil

by LauraNC

person lolita
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a good idea, you just need to put in a little mortailtail, I like it though, I hope that you can continue.
person sammygirl
schedule November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please contunue this story its great i really wanna see how buffy adapts to outside life and i wanna see how things go with tara and willow i really hate when willow is sad!!!!!!!


KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
person jen
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Im still loving this story.
person Bobbie L.
schedule November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is very well-written and a very sweet story. Excellent dialogue. I loved this!
person jen
schedule November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Its so sad you only have 4 reviews. I love your story so keep on posting, cheer up.
person Nicky
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm confused. Is it just me or is the story going too fast? One minute hae hates him and is sad, the next minshe she loves him and is really exited about the wedding.
Hmmm, maybe i'm just being a moaner.

Anyway, i like the way it is going, the story line with the council and everything. I reckon Spike should be in it. (haha, i just loim tim too much)

Keep writing!
person Sarah Aless
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I'm really enjoying this.
I did think Buffy got over her hatred of Angelus rather quickly, also that she said she loved him so quickly.
However, as Ii said I'm really enjoying it and can't wait for more. I think you did a great job of conveying how oprressive the Council are and how Buffy would HAVE to do as they said. Ii'd love for her to do some actual slaying though, but I'll take what ever you give us ;-)
good story
Sarah
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person eleagold
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey!
i love it!!! well, i'm not a total buffy/angel fan but still, stories like that might make me change my ming!!
waiting for more!!!
thanx
person Abbyland
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Interesting ... I really like the story.
person Anon
schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
good begining...more please...soon!