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yes, I like...more please

More! I like this one. It just needs more NC-17 stuff. Buffy/Spike, Joyce/Giles, Willow/Tara and so on. The Kinkier the betta! ;-)

More please.

OK, so I reread the new version and it is still very good. The additions lead in to more subplots and adds more dynamics to the other characters. However, I am not too sure about my verdict re the addition of professor Walsh and the bottle of something slipped into Riley's water. People do atrocious things all the time. This version seems to take away the blame from Riley and lay it at Pro. Walsh. Now I feel that Riley has been used andl sol sorry for him for the things that are happening to him. How will Buffy feel when she finds out that Riley was under the influence and paraniod. I think Buffy would still be cross but will now feel guilty and regretfull of the harm she causes Riley... mmm, 'Spose I'll have to see more to decide.

I liked this story the first time and was a little miffed that you didn't continue, so when I saw that you made changes, I had to read. I Like the changes and the added prolouge, I hope your planning to continue with this story now.

Two Days till Christmas
This is a very good fic
I've read this story twice now. The first time I was terrified for Buffy and the horrible situation she was in. It left me feeling bitter towards Riley. I of course realise this is just a story and went on to read some of the authors other work. Her other work was for the most part a lot lighter and extremely enjoyable.
I then stumbled across this again, tim time with the fourth chapter written. I was delighted by it. There were friendships strengthened and there was also some needed retribution (although I do hope there will be more. No person who commits acts as atrocious as Riley did should get off so lightly). I am anxious to see the next installment of this story, and hope it hasn't been stalled by people who can't see that this is just a story, and not somehow a personal affront to them. There are warnings at the begng ong of the story and they should be taken seriously. If you are offended by scenes containing rape then for god's sake, don't read this. If, however, you enjoy reading a story that contains rape and how a woman can then find the strength to go on, to face her nightmares and become whole again, then read this story!

Hey, this was an awsome story. I liked it when Buffy beat the crap out of Riley at the end. Spike and Buffy do make a really good couple. I think the even Dawn and Spike make a good couple but only in a couple of years when Dawn is older. Great, terrific story. Bye.

Wow!! I just read this story and then, to satisfy my curiosity, went to FFNet to read the reviews that were referred to in your "rant". I think this is a good story. I know that rape is a very touchy subject for some people. I also think that everyone probably reacts differently to being raped. But that really is beside the point isn't it? You have to remember that this is a work of FICTION. Just like the original show was a work of FICTION. There really are no such things as vampires or slayers or werewolves, etc. The entire show was just a fantasy, brought to life by a talented writero dio different than what Azrielle is doing with the characters that Joss created. Just bringing them to life in her own way. It may not be what some readers agree with. So be it. We all have our own tastes. I just feel that if you hate a story that much and it offends you, maybe you should stop reading it and go somewhere else. Just my 2 cents.

Keep going please this is great, does Riley die? Does Spike kill him? just keep going please you cant finish there

Love this story!! Can't wait to read more!