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November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i loved this, and definitely want to read more!
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November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, Well, Well. What will happen to our fantastic duo. We are all waiting. Please continue.
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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
more please
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October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story...is it hot in here?
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October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love stories that have Spike and Buffy being kidnapped together before Spike's declaration of love. So, good on story idea! I am having a little bit of trouble with the character of Buffy. It isn't Buffy. I don't know who it is, but it's not her. I would enjoy reading the characters a little more true to type. Also, it could be slowed down a bit. The scenes are rushed. I look forward to checking in on the story and finding out all the great things you put them through. Keep up the good work.
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October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
God this is a great story. Please continue.
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October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love it. I like the Spike/Buffy held hostage together stories. Love the bickering. Please update soon.
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October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This could be really good, but you should have someone proofread before you post. There are at least 4 grammar mistakes just in the f par paragraph. Stuff like that really jolts someone out of a good narrative flow.
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October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great...keep writing ...i can't wait to find out whats waiting for them now the cars stopped