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for A Slayer's Tale Retold

by Synn

person Sylvia
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad to see that you are again posting this fic. I love it! Please update as often as possible because I can't wait to see how the story and characters develop. Great job so far!
person flameywicca
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excelent, as always. Can't WAIT to see Dru flip her switch. *grins evilly* And Lindsey, bold? Interesting.. *grins* More soon, please? ~flamey
person lily
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I'm lovin this fic. I love when Buffy bit Spike. That was so sexual. I can't wait for you to update.
person tieria
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please. Loved the chapter. need some more spuffy inteeraction. And more lindsay.
person Cali
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It is good to see a new chapter on this story. I guess Buffy gave "Spike" a lesson in what not to say when you having an erotic make out session with your mortal enemy, huh? Buffy planted quite the erotic vampire bite on the Slayer. I can't wait to see Dru's reaction to the bite. Curious to see what Lindsay is up to...& how things will change when Angelus is cured. You have me very curious about everything that is happening. Hope to see another new chapter soon.
person Nicky
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved this...either you've given us two or i've missed an update...either way, I've missed this.

If you want to get us hooked on such a fabulous story, then PLEASE try and update more often...you're killing me.

I actually felt really sorry for Buffy with the "I love Dru." thing...if i was her, i might not have been so merciful.

He's an ass. Although, it is nice to see Spike rejecting Buffy for once...that never happened in the show, as las like her little puppy.

So, um...yeah. More please.

Nicky
person flameywicca
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"OH SHIT" just happens to be the understatement of the friggin' cey! *y! *grumbles* Of all the moment-shattering things I have EVER heard, THAT -ladies and gentlemen- was the clincher. How terribly STUPID does a guy have to be to mention that he's in love with another chick, JUST AS HE'S ABOUT TO GET LAID??? *sighs* Gods, I never thought I'd say it, but my Spikey is a world-class idiot... Speaking of which, you FIANLLY got around to making him "Spike", though Buffy didn't actually say it outloud. But it still counts. *grins* Faith gets a vamp of her very own? *grins big* Yay! May I request the vamp? (don't really know why I'm asking since I'm just gonna say it anyway) I vote you make Wes a vamp, and then get them together. And then get someone else to be Spike and whoever-else's Watcher. *grins* Good idea, ain't it? And, since I'm on the subject anyway, who IS gonna be the Second Slayer? I vote it be.. Hmm... How about we get a little diversity up in here (in the tv show sense of the word) and let Gunn be Faith's terpterpart?.. or would that be Kendra's, since she was the second Slayer ever on the show. *sh* Wh* Whatever. And the Watcher could be Kate or something. I dunno, your call. More soon kay, let's not take weeks to update like last time. *grins* Seeya ~flamey
person Cali
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just read your first 6 chapters. I really like the twists & turns in your story. You have managed to surprise me several times...Lindsey...Faith...Kendra...which gives your story an element of unpredictability. This is good because I keep thinking I know what is going to happen. I like that you are setting up the conflict within Buffy early. The encounter between William & Buffy in the last chapter was sexy, intense & unexpected. Can't wait to see what happens next. I am anxious to see what other interesting changes you have made in your alternate universe in the next chapters.
person flameywicca (2lazy2login)
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa... Where in the Seven Hells have _I_ been??? This is fantabulous!!! I love the ST going on between Spike (whom is not yet "Spike", even though you said he would be *stare*) & Buffy, and Lindsey's lustin' for the Buff. Though I do feel bad for Faith. She deserves a vamp of her own, one who'll be true to her. Thanks uber-muchly for making Kendra a main vaI loI love her so much. *sniff* She is very much missed. The scene between B and Willow gave me the shivers, shivers of the good -not bad. Can't wait for the next chapter. Seeya ~flamey
person E.F.
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God I love these AU's (where Buffy and Spike do the 'switch'). You're keepin' me intrigued here! Love'n it.