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for Caught Between Two Lovers

by patty

person Karen
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous story so far. I have loved all of your stories that I have read.
person leahdiana
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love this story!!! Update again soon please!!!!!!!
person Black Dahlia
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Patty,
Are you only going to be posting updates here and at OFaF from now on? I just happened to stumble across this one. Happy to see it, we haven't seen a chappy of this one in a while. For some reason, there's something so endearing in Buffy's recital of Camelot, and in Spike listening to her do it. And the words "before hell breaks loose" don't bode to wfor for our lovers, do they? *pouts* Another faboo installment, lady! *bribes Patty's muse with cherry gummis*
person Nica
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Worth the wait. Please keep going.
person Jen
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you updated this story! It's one of my riterites and I've been dying to know what happens! Please post more soon! :)
person oleanderrose
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy you updated! What hell, there's gonna be hell? I can't wait! Please don'te use us wait too long!
person patty
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I undend ynd your point about 'angelface'. I've had a few people tell me that it hits a
clinker note for them, so I'm considering dropping it in the future if it's going to bother
people. I honestly wasn't conjuring up images of Angel when I came up with it,
cuz 'yech!' (That's just me. No offense to any Angel lovers out there) I was going
more for the "Gee, she's got a pretty face, and so innocent, so young..." You see where
I'm going?

But, I will keep it in mind in the future, and I AM working on the next chapter, along with
the next chapter of Sweet Sixteen and Blue Eyed Devil.

And let me take this opportunity to say thanu fou for all of the wonderful feedback
you've sent me. I love that people are reading the things I write, but when they take a
moment to tell me that, it really makes my day.

Hugs and Kissses......................Pattyanne
person Burnz
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First...love all your fics. Second... angelface, it threw me for a while because I think 'Angel' when I see it for some strange reason. Third, good work here I love stronger characterizations of Spike, and its nice to see a a non-jaded Buffy. Lastly updates! I need and crave them. Thanks for the well written fic
person becky
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ive been waitin for a finished story for so long i love this idea please please finish it!!!:)
person Draconiansrock
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! What a g fic fic! VERY angsty and suspenseful......so much so i can't wait for the next chapter! PLZ continue the story!