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for Caught Between Two Lovers

by patty

person Nicky
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM





Finally...



(And ouch with the ankle crunch)
person Judith
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Much better. Now that Buffy and William are together again, will you continue to devlop their story? You could continue the story either along the Buffy storylines or further delve into your own alternative universe. I would love to see it and I look forward to the next chapter.
person Judith
schedule November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have only three words for that last chapter: that was cruel! Poor Buffy, the one night she allows herself to be dragged off by her friends causes so much heartbreak. You would think after a guy reaches his centennial he would recognize jumping to a conclustion before gathering all the facts. Maybe it shows no matter how old you are, age does not master the heart. Or something..... Beautifully written as always, I wonder what the Scoobies will say when they finally meet the mysterious William? I look forward to the next chapter, so please update soon!
person MsSpikester
schedule November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You left it hanging there?!! You are naughty!
person Devoveo
schedule November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NEXT CHAPTER!!!! No more torture..... Spike's coming back... NOW!!!!!
person Angi
schedule November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Anne! Come on now! You?re giving me a heart-attack! What a way to rise the tension! Please go on soon...(Bites her fingernails...) :-)
person Nicky
schedule November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I nearly did it! I nearly read past that last sentence!

No worries though, i didn't.

You realise that now you have to give us the next chapter soon!

I can't bare it! You have made me cry TOO MUCH! I don't know how much more i can take.

You are a fantastic writer - you get me right there *points to heart with blurry, tear-filled eyes.*

Thanks
person Nicky
schedule November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
No, i have changed my mind...

I dont like it anymore! It isn't fair! You are being slow and unreasonable.

Me (and your other readers i have no doubt) are hanging on by a thread, so take him the hell home!!!

Please...

Nicky.
person patty
schedule November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Don't be upset. There are still things that need to happen before he can return. Just hang
in with me and I promise I'll make it worth your while.
person Nicky
schedule November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for listening me about the slow and unreasonable part. I know you have a life beyond this MAGNIFICENT fic, and i am actually happy that it isn't over quite yet.

You really are a great writer.

Thanks for the quick update.

Nicky