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for Caught Between Two Lovers

by patty

person Angi
schedule November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I already told you that reading your stories really makes my day. Every day, so thanks again. I like this one particularly because
you altered Spikes character a little, and in a way I see him anyway. I don?t think that the original character description from the
otherwise amazing writers on BtVS always made sense. The things they made him do often didn?t go along with earlier character
description on the show. So thanks again for all the spuffiness you bestow on us. Before I forget - one thing - I don?t think Spike
would use "Voues..es...." that?s too formal. Wouldn?t it be more likely for him to say "Tu sque que tu est la....." especially if he says
"je t?aime" later? And by the way I love the recitation of Wordsworth, very nice idea!
person flameywicca
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
No prob. No where is it written tveryvery Spuffy smut fic HAS to be kniky. Besisdes, I wouldn't enjoy the fic as much as I have been if there wasn't as much humor as sex. More soon, please. ~flamey
person Nicky
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
"Any particular part of me?" he asked.

Buffy swallowed hard, determined to see this through and prove
she wasn't an innocent little nitwit anymore. "Yeah....off your\he che cleared her throat. "...s."s."


I loved that!
So funny.

Yeah, anyway - i thought the chapter was great, so dont worry. :D
Nicky
person Slayerq
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
No offense, but the thought of writing or reading most kink scences causes numerous giggles so don't worry.....I enjoyed the latest chapter and look forward to the next update!
person flameywicca
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*looking very much like she wants to laugh* That was.. *cough, snort* Umm.. *snort* Interesting?... *busts out laughing* That was.. That was bloody marvolous. MORE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~flamey
person Nicky
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, i'm loving this.

Thanks for the quick update!

Nicky
person MsSpikester
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
But she was only dancing with Xander!!!! Get it straight Spikey, she is yours!!! AAAArrrrrggghhhh.....I shall be patient - but not much longer, OK? LOL
person Jen
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story and I'm completely hooked!! It's so sweet and so romantic. Too bad it couldn't have been really like this huh? Please continue this wonderful story, I can't wait to read what happens next!! Off to read more of your stories :)
Jen.
person LadyLiz
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was wonderful! I loved it, absolutely perfect!! And your use of songs could not be any better. I'm a HUGE fan of this story and Blue Eyed Devil. I'm constantly checking for updates. Please, give more of both!
person Jessica
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Definitely loving the Spuffiness. I can't wait for your next chapter.