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by patty

person lolita
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well this was yet again another wonderful story from you Pattyanne I truly loved it. I liked the fact that Joyce felt comfortable in asking Spike to aft after her daughter whilst she was out of town. I liked the scene when he took her to the dentist and had to physically carry heto tto the waiting room, it's kinda like my trips to the dentist, but I don't have Spike to carry me in, just my dad dragging me in whilst I'm kicking and screaming! lol. Anyway, when she was telling Spike why she was scared of going to the dentist and he was thinking "God no, not that," I was thinking the exact same thing. I'm glad it wasn't what we were all thinking. I liked how he took care of her when she got home, and the sex scene was very hot, I wish I could think of a different and better word to describe it but I can't - so damn tired! lol. I liked it that Buffy fell asleep whilst talking with Spike again as well, although I wanted to know what Joyce said tooreatreat job!

Lolita
person Azrielle
schedule October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another great story!!
person Annette
schedule October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed the story. Love the sweet Spike and, of course, the smut. Great job as always.
person Millie
schedule October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Again, thank you for yor promptness. It makes me have a power trip! Thiory ory was sweet and fun, and I will be looking for your next story. I really enjoyed it!


Luv ya,
Millie
person Millie
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! Um....Hey!! That was delicious, and I don't mean the eggs. I want to see this next scene play out. I enjoyed my wonky pop pip pills too. I'll catch the next episode of Bite Down tomorrow. (Aren't I a "pushy tart"?)
person Annette
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok, first, you've made me love Spike even more than I already did; and then second, I just had my impacted wisdom teeth removed and why didn't I have a Spike to spoil me rotten? Life is so not fair.
person Liz
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! How adorably sweet!! I love it! More please!!
person Ivy
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice, very nice. With Buffy Slayerness I guess the pills would wear off faster. Good work next part please.
person Millie
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You know..hat\hat's not quite fair. I had my wisdom teeth out, and I didn't have a yummy Spike to carry me to the car! My fault I guess....I never checked to see if my insurance would cover such an nse.nse. Keep going, I wanna see him feed her all sorts of treats and make with the babying.