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for Baby Blue

by Prophecy

person Kiera
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is AMAZING. It's an absolute travesty that between this story and Need to Destroy, there was only one review. Because this is writing, at it's finest. I feel like this is exactly the way the story probably would have gone if it was real life and not a WB show. The part with Buffy, too. Heartbreaking and so powerful. I always hated Dawn a bit, but she seemed like she had real potential to go dark. I LOVE dark Dawn.

You are excellent, excellent, excellent! If I didn't like something, I wouldn't hesitate to tell you, but I love every single word.