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for Blue Eyed Devil

by patty

person Kao
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORWE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*gets on hands and knees* please????

Kao
person Amy
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I love all of your work, it seems I always read and re-read them when I'm in the mood for a pick me up. This story here is no exception. Ahhhh! I cannot believe how you left us dangling on this newest chapter! I can't wait for the following one. I'm not just on the edge of my seat but holding onto it with just a pinkie!
person ScreamingFlamingos
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What?
What happened?
Where did that come from?

Girl, I've never gotten wipelashed so bad before! How dare you! I was right with Buffy, with the sinking feeling, the confusion, then the indignation, and the WHAM! You broadsided us with a marriage proposal! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! I was soooooooo afraid that there would be this big blow up.

Question: Does this mean that Spike didn't see that little shit Riley touching Buffy? Why would Spike then propose if he saw them together? Is Buffy going to explain that she was official ending things with Riley?

We're gonna need another chapter ASAP girl! I mean it, we're need another chapter super soon, so get those brain cells thinking and those fingers typing! Please? Pretty please with a Spike on top??? ;-)
person ScreamingFlamingos
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
P.S.

I know that Riley is gonna try to ruin things, so would it be asking a lot to have Riley suddenly die? Couldn't we have a car crash of some sort, mugging gone bad, fatal food poisoning, etc. Or how about he just drops dead the next day due to some extremely rare heart condition or just because he's an evil bastard. OR, God could smite him from the heavens! I'm always in favor with the God smite action! :-) I HIGHLY doubt any of your readers would be upset at Riley's passing. Just think about it...
person Anon
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Part 45 was painfully short, just what are you trying to do to us anyway?
person aly
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You almost killed me with the angst of part 45.
You were so evil ;-) but the end was sooooo nice I forgive you everything.
Please keep it up ! Thumbs up for you !
person spikegirl7
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you will finish this, no? and please don't make us wait a month for it. I WANNA SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
person Hannah
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Evil woman... It was great, please update soon.
person Anon
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww!
person MsSpikester
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great twist at the end! Thought he was going to pull one of his (very handsome, oh so sexy..) temper tantrums,for a second - Whoa, good save! lol....Looking forward to the next installment!