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for Blue Eyed Devil

by patty

person irissss
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love this story it just like all the mushy books I read as a teenager (10 years ago) keep going.
person kimber
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay,

Nice little wake me........LOL.....more please.......I can't wait to see how Spike intends to whoo the fair maiden....

Kimber
person Mandi
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I love this fic..can't wait for the next update!

And I just loooved this line;

"You're so beautiful," he said, still sliding smoothly in and out
of her. "You're soft...and warm...and so pretty...you're a five car pile
up on the interst..wi..with multiple injuries."

Damn..that was funny! OK..ready for more! :)
person Annette
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! Loving this story. More, please.
person Whisper
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!! But i was glad it was a dream. More UST!! then they can go at it like rabbits!!=)
person irissss
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
New it was to soon for sex, I love the chase aspect of the story. Write again soon
person SeaBlue
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*squeee*

Ooh, write more, write faster! I'm loving it!
person Anon
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh this is good! keep the momentum going.i love this not so subtle peusuit.
person Livia
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Complaints are you kidding me. This story is awsome. I can't wait for the next chapter. This idea for a story is so good and the it's so cute. I love this story so much it's great. Update soon.
person Susan
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this! Poor Buffy isn't going to know what hit her. Please write more soon!