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for Blue Eyed Devil

by patty

person Sarah
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Tease!!! Although quite injoyable keep them coming(in every way)
person Rhi
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can't stand how good you are at this...please...more...please!
person Azrielle
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another AWESOME chapter. Keep em coming.
person Hannah
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sweet Lord!!!! Your killing me!! Pleash plh please update soon!!! This story is so good, thank you for writing all of these fabulous stories!!!
person lem0nhead
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Der God! I envy your genious!
person laura
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You are such a devil!!! but i love it.. keep writing!
person Rhi
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, you rule!
person Renee\'
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WHOA! I have to tell you, that last chapter (14)- wow! I think you melted the ice cubes in my glass a few feet away from the computer! That scene was so HOT! And, Spike being all take charge is sooo cool. I really like how he is portrayed here. One question, though. He's not a jua just use her (and I think take her virginity) and run off, right? He really is that nice guy you're portraying? Because I'm worried I'm being set up for a major let doand and I don't want Spike to be heartless or something. I'll cry! But, anyway, your story is really amazing. The tone is so adult and sophisticated while maintaining an innocent edge, and the POV is really wow. I always check this site to see if you have updated, and I can't wait to read 15!
person laura
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOODNESS! I think I love you because you wrote Spike so indescribably sexy...grrr argh is right! Please keep writing...and I'm not very good at telling people how to improve their stories...but in Chapter 13 I think...you say "times flies" and I think most people would say "time flies". :-) Otherwise, just yay you and the sexy seduction.
person Whisper
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
now i need cold shower. Very sexy