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for Blue Eyed Devil

by patty

person Renee\'
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was AMAZING! I love it, do it again! No, wait, damn- it just wouldn't be the same. It's ok, I'll just read it again....a few times. :) Seriously, though, that was beautiful. Absolutely beuatiful. If only all love was really like that, eh? Well, anyways, I really like this. Try putting it up at Spuffy Fantasy Archives. They are now accepting new stories, did ya know that? Also, it might get ya a little more feedback, since I bet you crave it like most writers do. Anyways, have a good Thanksgiving, if you're American, anyways.
person jennybear
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whew, I think I need a cold shower. lol. That was amazing writing. I liked the virgin slant very much. I'm not sure where you're going to go now that the chasing is done, but I look very forward to it!!! : )
person Kari Mouke
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Don't you dare apologize for Spike being Buffy's first lover! If we wanted the real thing, we could stick with just the show. We want fantacy baby! That's just what you give us, and I for one, can't thank you enough!
person Annette
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Perfect.
person vicann
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is long and slow is goood! Keep it up (so to speak).
person jennybear
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
There is definitely something to be said for long and slow. I could read this forever. What an amazing seduction. I love it. I love it!!!
person Rhi
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooo.....please don't leave us there....more, more, more...help!
person Karen
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Blue Eyed Devil my ass... you're the devil!!!!! I just came home from the hospital and checked on the computer to see any updates and you left me there (ch16)!!!!!! You're the devil and I worship you!
person Stormybreeze
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you really are a tease you know that!!! Still love it though.
person Jen
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whew! Is it hot in here or is it just me?