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for Blue Eyed Devil

by patty

person Annette
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O a s a sexy motorcycle ride coming up? Can't wait.
person Karen
schedule December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok. That was HOT. Would write more, but I've got a little surprise for my husband.....
person Margie
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Up to Ch 19 - Wow! This is really well written! I hope you continue it soon. I love the long slow seduction rather the the quick wham bam! Wonderfully visual and sweet. I love all of Spike's endearments also, the darlings and the babys. Also very sweet the way you showed us his thoughts after realizing he forgot a condom. Loving the whole thing so far. Great Job!
person scrab
schedule December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So glad to see you back!! Have been enjoying your story so much, I was afraid it had become yet another unfinished one. I know you are working on several at the same time, but this one has hooked me. Can't wait for more of the performing stuff. Loved the slow build up to their first time. Feel free to keep the fire smoldering. Looks, touches, etc.
Again, it's great you're back!
person Annette
schedule December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So glad you updated again. Looking forward to the rehearsal.
person Samolly
schedule December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Thank you for updating!
person Kari Mouke
schedule December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You are the queen of great sex scenes! My favorite thing about this chapter, however, is Buffy's cooking ability. Why, oh why, do so many writers insist on her being a bad cook, wshe she went to such great lengths to fix a feast in that famous Thanksgiving episode? Let the little lady have some layers! I just love this sweet sweet story.
person Nicky
schedule December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I don't have woror hor how amazing your characters are...

Nicky
person Slayersgift
schedule December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Took you long enough and wasn't dissapointed! :)

Keep it coming!
person Lyric
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love the way you string music into the story, love the plot, and especially love the hero : )

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update Blue Eyed Devil! It's so good and you're leaving me hanging!

sincerely,
A fan

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