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for Blue Eyed Devil

by patty

person jill
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
don't stop im loving it so far it is getting good!!!!!!!!
person shell
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo, he cant leave like that!!!!!! please update please please please!!!
person Kimber
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh you dirty, naughty little girl you......Lord....now I'm going to be setting by the computer waiting for the next chapter......bad girl......good thing I'm close to the kitchen...and bathroom.......LOL

Kimber
person katsie
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i was reluctant to begin reading a story that was so established but i'm glad i changed my mind. your story is amazing. your words just flow off the page and they create such a vivid picture. i love your story, so much so, i never want it to end. keep up the fantastic work, cheers.
person Annette
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love how he whispers that he will love only her always after their lovemaking. This Spike is just so perfect (even if he does have to leave to go on tour).
person Sarah Aless
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
waaaaahhhh!!!! I don;t want him to go. Both him and this fic are tooooooo delicious. It's ok i trust you to make it better, even if you ortuorture us for a while first. Doesn't mean I'm not going to sit here and huff to myself like a spoiled child though ;) Great chapter hot as always. More!
Sarah
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person Mia
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More damnit more! Ok now that I'm done being rude please please please I'm down on my knees begging you here please write more! I'm hooked! I'm cought! Hook line and sinker! Trapped! I'm nothing more than a druggie looking for her next hit. So please feed my need and update soon. As in now.
person Nicky
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Although it'll probably kill me and leave me emotionally retarded, i'm glad that he's going to go. I think we need it.

You set out to do something, and you have done it, no doubt.

I know you'll make us cry, but it'll make Blue Eyed Devil complete.

You've triggered a lot of emotions, i guess now we're just waiting for the last one...the tears.

Don't be too harsh on her Patty, she's just an ex-virgin school teacher after all...

Nicky
person Holly
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This has become my new favorite story. Please write more soon!
person sluggie
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Guh. Damn. Love the story and the latest chapter...Damn.