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for Blue Eyed Devil

by patty

person E.F.
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
.....uh.......good god, woman!



person pattyanne
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And he will be doing it....a lot of it. Believe me, he'll be on his knees any minute now.
person Alicia
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So Beautiful! I need more and soon :-) The love scenes are amazing- erotic and loving all at the same time. I loved the motorcycle sex. I love the idea of Buffy being inexperienced- and I'm glad that you portray her with the fire, passion and a bit of a wild side when need be :-) Can't wait for the next update.
person willowmouse
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY! They are back together ... I kept expecting him to walk through the door and scoop her up from her crying heap on the floor - but this was much better!!
person Nicky
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, Pattyanne, i must say you ahve outdone yourself...

Well, alright, no. This wasn't my favorite chapter...it doesn't outdo the warm, fuzzy, relaxed feeling i got when i read part 16.

(((In the aftermath of ecstasy, the room was
blissfully quiet.

Devlin lay with his arms wrapped around Buffy's waist,
and his head pillowed on her tummy. He smiled
when he felt her fingers playing in his hair.

"You okay, kitten?"

"Mm-hmm," Buffy sighed. "Never...ever...better."

"Never ever?"

She giggled. "Ever." )))

That was just amazing, but i was worried that they would be apart for too long in this new chapter, but NO, you came through...(and to think, i lost my faith in you...only for a moment).

Pattyanne, you are wonderful, and i will never, ever forget this story.

Continue...i beg of you...we all do.
ky
ky

person Anon
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutly lovely!!! Fantastic -- you are by far the master, I bow to your genius.
person Lily
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw! That was so wonderful, I'm so glad they made up. I was so worried but I knew you would pull through!
person gattaca
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Le siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh.......I'm so happy now. That was perfect. I can't wait for the make-up scene. I'm sure it's gonna be just as perfect. You kick some ass chicka!! :D
person Egala
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting, and it was worth it. Please write more.
person C.B.
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yippie-ki-ya, mother f-er! I wanna marry your fic. You are my little pervy ray o' sunshine in my boring life. Keep up the good work! I about damn near cried at the last chapter, but, as usual, ya made it up to me. Love your work!