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for Blue Eyed Devil

by patty

person Caroline
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh...the mental pictures :
palpitating gently...mouth watering..brain not functionning.. My GOD ! That was awesome , so erotic , that I ca fin find the right words . Just saying that you're a goddess for writing hot dialogues ..
Anf if their separation allows them to exchange plenty of phone calls as incredible as this one , I'm not upset for Buffy!
person Nicky
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
We know that feedback is deeply appreciated, and you know that updates are deeply appreciated, so atleast we're all on the same level here!

Glad to see an update, as always. I'm counting down the clock until he leaves, and it's gonna be one SAD affair.

Loving this still...

Nicky
person Bocaita
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please!!
person txjmfan
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn! That chaptern should've come with a disclaimer for a cold shower afterward! HOT
person Azrielle6969
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
He needs to hurry back to Buffy.
person Diane
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have become a willing slave to writing - anticipating chapter updates from your various stories. You never disappoint! Clever Spike keeping their distance bearable with hot phone sex! Looking forward to more...
person Debbie
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pleaseee hurry and finish this story! When you do, please email it to me!!!! GREAT STORY AND WRITING!
person Sarah Aless
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*pouts* I swear I was as upset as Buffy that he wouldn't make it home. Then again, the beginning of that telephone conversation was VERY promising and definitely got my attention! I hope they're gonna do what I think they're gonna do. I just know Mr Devlin will be REALLY good at it. More soon PLEASE!
Sarah
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person Jen
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
They are just too cute :) Glad you updated and looking forward to more...as always :)
person Azrielle6969
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YUMMY PHONE SEX TO COME? I love this story. Hate that there has to be angst but hey, it wouldn't be the same without it.