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for Blue Eyed Devil

by patty

person Anon
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was soooooooooo not funny. u scared me when you said that was the end!
person C.B.
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooohhh! Your a mean ol' hussy!:) Keep it comin' girly!
person spikeprop
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You're EVIL! LOL! Freaking me out like that with "The End" stuff. For shame...
person willowmouse
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just loved this story - great plot. brillant writing.... I'm kinda sad its over, but theres always "Acting the part" :) oh and the way you ended it, loads of room for a sequel???? FANTASTIC!
person E.F.
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are a bad, bad girl...I thought I would have to swallow my heart in order to get it out of my throat when I read, "The End"...Can I just say that your talent, not only in, uhm, 'Spuffy', but as a writer, is increasing every single time I read something of yours? You're deffinately in the top ten of the best Spuffy writers out there, P.A.! I enjoy everything I read of yours - and I'm picky!
person Diane
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Omg! I almost had a heart attack at the the end, you little minx! But I should know to fear not for you would never leave us so... um, unsatisfied! Looking forward to more!
person Anon
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was a great chapter loved the phone playtime! please update soon!
person Anon
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great job please update soon awesome chapter!
person October
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Yade ade me cry when it said the end.

Then like five minutes later I glanced at the screen to see just kidding.

Im such a fool.

Gah. You got me good. Meanie.
person Anon
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is that really the end?

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