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for Blue Eyed Devil

by patty

person Poetlover
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. Then again, I enjoy all of your stories. And for the record, I love your sex scenes. They go on just the right length as far as I'm concerned. But, then, I do love a good, long love scene.
person LadyLiz
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If it helps, I had a crappy ass day too, but that hotter than hell chapter made up for it. Just who in their right min complained about too much sex?! If they don't wanna read it, skip to the next chapter. No one's making them read it. Don't letm gem get to you. Just keep on writing!
person furiousalwayz
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the people who said your sex scenes are too long should be slapped. what do they expect? it is a NC-17 story. anyway, i love your sex scenes and all the other parts of your story. you are such a talented writer. this is one of my favorite stories written by you. take care and update soon...along with your other wonder stories.
person obsessed
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your sex scenes are great stuff....
Man, oh man, oh man...hot.
:)
I seem to have writer's block writing them myself, so I have the utmost respect for you being able to.....
person txjmfan
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was hot! But have a feeling the next chappie will be hotter. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
person willowmouse
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great to see another wonderful chapter!!!
person MrsBigPileofDust
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whaaaaa haaaaaaa haaa *wipes tears* Since I have no chance in hel act actually having that with James, can you get me a Devlin of my very own? Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Gawd this is a sexy story.
person CJ
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I read this chapter AGES ago *cries* you aren't abandoning it are you? You wouldn't do that to me I'm sure!
person Anne
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think I've reviewed this story on another site before but I just read the latest two chapters and I love it! You are really a fabulous writer. Keep it up!
person Vel-Vette
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hot, steamy, innocently provacative and many more romantic and lusty things!