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August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww, it was so sweet.
I don't know if you updated two chapters or if I just missed an update, but both of those chaps were new to me and I loved them both.
He is so sweet...I wish men were really like that.
The chances of finding anyone even resembling the sweetness and attentiveness of Mr Devlin are beyond slim.
You're just setting us all up for disapointment, in the most beautiful way.
I'll probably love this story forever.
Nicky
I don't know if you updated two chapters or if I just missed an update, but both of those chaps were new to me and I loved them both.
He is so sweet...I wish men were really like that.
The chances of finding anyone even resembling the sweetness and attentiveness of Mr Devlin are beyond slim.
You're just setting us all up for disapointment, in the most beautiful way.
I'll probably love this story forever.
Nicky
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August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I adore your sex scenes!!! They are never too long. Obviously, that other reviewer is insane, sexually frustrated, or both. Keep up the great work!!
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August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Huh..incoherent just now! It was the most beautiful , hottest love scene I ever read , I think . You're a goddess for writing hot s , b , but you went beyond my expectations , there.. Your William and Buffy are so wonderfully portrayed , basking in their mutual love. Thank you for updating so fast.
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August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Guh! Made my morning happy.
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August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOT HOT HOT That's all I can say about that scene. Keep up the great work. I loved it.
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August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was very glad to see a new chapter of your delightful and fantastic story : it remains one of my favorite , with ' Sweet sixteen ' ( and ' Caught between two lovers' , of course ! ).
What a beautiful and romantic evening Devlin and Buffy were sharing ! I love seeing them in San Fransisco , and you pictured their passion , their feelings , in a ways that always keeps me riveted , always makes me dream .. I enjoyed the other side of Buffy : bolder , playful , and not afraid of expressing her desires.
I look forward the rest of the night , there are so hotter moments for them to live , and for us to read.
*sigh* You're such a wonderful storyteller.
What a beautiful and romantic evening Devlin and Buffy were sharing ! I love seeing them in San Fransisco , and you pictured their passion , their feelings , in a ways that always keeps me riveted , always makes me dream .. I enjoyed the other side of Buffy : bolder , playful , and not afraid of expressing her desires.
I look forward the rest of the night , there are so hotter moments for them to live , and for us to read.
*sigh* You're such a wonderful storyteller.
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August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, so glad you're still updating this one! More please!
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August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God, if that's how you write after a bad day, I hope you have one tomorrow, too! You've made it into my hall of fame with that last chapter. I'll be printing this one out so that I can read it over and over again. Brava!
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August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If that's how you write when you've had a bad day, I hope you have one tomorrow, too. You've made it into my hall of fame with that last chapter, which will be printed out, bound, and kept bedside permanently. Now, if I could only do that to Spike Devlin!
Kudos.
Kudos.
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August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think everyone in the universe needs a cigarette after that. WOW! Too long? *snicker* NEVER!
Chris
Chris