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for Blue Eyed Devil

by patty

person Hannah
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God, I love this story, I read it over and over. It's strange, I just got out of the bath and tommorrow I start my first day as a pre-school teacher. I've already had a hard time keeping this story off my mind and I know it will be impossible now! Thanks, it was incredible!!
person shell
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i dont know how anyone can ever say your sex scenes go on too long, you write them all too well for them to be too long!!
loved this chapter along with every other you've written, and i love the fact that they're in love, {but i dont expect anything less when i read your stories} its so sweet, especially the way you describe it in that chapter about the sex being sweeter because of the love they shared! its so cute!!
please update soon!!!
person E.F.
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dear. God.
You just keep getting better and better at writing these things!
Thas THs THE best scene - sex or no sex - I've read from you!
Sorry about your bad day, hon! And here you are still, giving us our Spuffy fix!
(bowing down in humble admiration)
You are, without doubt, one of the BEST fic writers out there, P.A.!
person nevernever
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
fabulous chapter, absolutely fabulous.
person Sofia
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Luv, you really deserve the good feedback, with or without a bad day behind you... your work is exquisite and I love all of it!!! So keep it up!!! And don't let the every-day nasties bring you down!
person willowmouse
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoever said your "love" scences are too long, is crazy! That was wonderful ... still i wonder, they have never used protection ..mmmmmmmmmmmmmm?????????
person pattyanne
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Noticed that,did you? Hmmm..
person Anon
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please. And thank you very much for the double update.
person lovesbitca37
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn! That was gooood!
Can't wait for more but I doubt it could get any hotter!
person Kar
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know I haven't reviewed in a while *hides head in shame* but I'm still reading everything (especially CBTL *hint*)

Great chapter! I really like how Buffy is becoming more comfortable with her own body and sex. She's begining to realize that she does have a hold on Spike, and he on her. I certainly hope that their weekend ends happily.