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for When Did The Building Fall Down?

by sarahaless

person Jen
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was hot! I want more, dont let that be the end!
person Amanda
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Two words: Friggin' Awesome!
person patty
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Read part 2....still a little dazed....fabulously naughty. Poor Spike...all
worn out. Can't say I'm surprised after a work out like that!

Terrific, as always, Sarah

Pattyanne
person Jewls13
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you are like, my new god!!!!!! I've always loved your work (I appologise for not having reviewed before) but this just took it to a new level. It was the hottest, kinkyest, most delicious thing I have read in a very very very very long time. You are like, the first person in a long time to bring anal into one of these, and with a stake no less! Unbeleivable. I found myself going back and reading that again just to make sure I wasn't imagining it. It was so unexpected but awsome.
I am so in awe of people who can write this stuff because I can't. I can apperciate it on two levels. the first-I love erotica. I don't know what it is, but I just love the genera. And also, I'm a writer. and I'm trying to learn to write sex scenes. But I just can't seem to learn from you, because, not only do I get so wrapped up in the story that I forget completly about studying it for its technical merits; but the writing itself is so fluid and flawless that I can't imagin someone actully writing this. It feels like it simply exists. I am completly in awe.
and in heat. I need to take a very cold shower. No, what I need is to get some. But I'll have to settle for a cold shower, cause there is no way I'm gonna get to sleep Jew
person Chicklet
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HOT ..... and wonderful! More please!
Chicklet
person patty
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sarah.....sexy and hot as always. Loved it. Going to read part 2 now...Patty