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for Sweet Sixteen

by patty

person txjmfan
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovin' it so far! Very sweet! More soon please!
person Kimber
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Patty, PattyAnne

Do you ever sleep.....well if not then I can see where all the creatitve energy is coming from.....you have such an array of stories that you have wondering which update to expect....keep up the wonderful work.....you storytelling is breath taking....(and it's not just the sex either....LOL)

Kimber
person October
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful...

Now my night is complete and I can go to bed. I knew there was a reason for staying up. :)
person Kar
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, keep them coming! I love their young love
person Burnz
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another good fic. I like the getting to know you phase and the clandestine meetings. I am anxious to see what will happen as they progress in their relationship.
person Buffy
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! Please update again asap! :)
person Majandrina
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Please keep going.
person Jen
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! You updated! :) Isn't William cute saying he'd carry books for some girl...somewhere, chivalry is not dead! LOL. Great update...keep it coming!
person Shelby
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE ((etc.)) update!!! It's killing me that you haven't in such a long time! (I know you have a lot of other stories out there but please, UPDATE!!!!!) Okay, anyway, your story is fantastic (I don't beg for nothing) :)
person Shelby
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, UPDATE!!! Your killing me because your not updating, the story is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!