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even though i've had to wait for what seems like forever for an up date, i can't say i'm disapointed, this is still one of my favorite stories. keep going, i just love all your stuff.

I love this fic! It's so sweet, and they're so innocent and in love. It certainly takes me back!
Great ideas, can't wait till after the dance ;)

I loved this chapter cant wait till the next one.

I love this story. Great AU hope to see more soon.

Ooh, ooh so looking forward to the beach after the game!

This is amazing. I love your story. Change the names and the location, and it's me and my first boyfriend with our first experiences. I almost forgot what it was like. I love how you'een een capturing the emotions. The nervousness and the desire to please ar cru crucial in this situation...most stories I've read involved nothing but porn star antics for their first time. But how you write Buffy here makes it easy for one to connect with her. Actually, I think most girls were okay with a boy doing things to them and had a near panic attack when asked to reciprocate! (Aren't we terrible things?) Anyway, enough with my babbling. Just please stay true to the characters you've created and don't have them whip out handcuffs and chocolate sauce. I admit to digging the smut, bu'm s'm seeing this as a coming-of-age thing that is sweet and special. So keep the "corny" lyrics, they fit in well--and they're not corny. I also can't wait to hear William's secret! Update often!

Love the new chapter. Look forward to another update soon.

Great Mother does know more then you think chapter.......


Hope to read more about our little lovebirds soon......cause it is getting harder and harder to push which fic I want to to devote the most time too.............


Kimber

I'm really diggin into this story. Always reminds me of my highschool days and the boys. All thos firsts. It's only been 5 yrs but it took reading your story to bring back the fond memories that i hadn't thought of in a long time. Thanks. Please update soon.

Wonde as as always.

I almost didn't read this, i nearly missed it, but i'm so glad that i found it!

I like that these two are so innocent, discovering things together, whereas in Blue Eyed DevSpikSpike is teaching Buffy.

Gotta say though, i am loving Acting The Part more than i can say.

Your fics brighten up my day!

Nicky