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for Sweet Sixteen

by patty

person Crimson_Butterfly
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very interesting love story between buffy and spike!!~i just love this fic a lot a lot a lot!!!!!!~ hehehehe!!!! *begging* please update soon ya!!!!! keep up the good work!!!!!!!!
person Vel-Vette
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love their intimate connection and how responsible they are. I especially loved how William defended Buffy against Angel. Very sweet.
person Des
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story of first love... I like how they are both taking their first steps instead of Spike always being experienced. Continue just getting good.
person laura
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! pattyanne rules! how sweet they are, very romantic
person nevernever
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mmmm lovely! love this story!
person M
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Can't wait to read more!
person Anon
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazing...what a fabulous story. Write more!
person Samolly
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that grinding scene was hot!!! I love how natural and innocent you've made them.
person lovesbitca37
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely AMAZING chapter! So real as they slowly lose that innocence, I absolutely adore this story. Please continue, I wanna see what happens next!
person Jen
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
He's just so chivalrous. I love it. They're so sweet together. I wonder if Angel will do anything? Or maybe he'll be too embarrassed? So...when are they gonna do it? LOL.