AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Sweet Sixteen

by patty

person Eve(voodoochat)
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really love your story its soo good.
person Alicia
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey I lvoed it
person Millie
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah---the good old days. Makes me wish I was 16 again. And had a William to play with. I'm looking foreward to seeing these two succeed at all their endevours.


person Azrielle
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WThatThat was awsome. I am really enjoying this. Please update soon.
person Liz
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm goin'n nuts here waiting for another update!! I can't wiat for more!!!!!
person Alana
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutely beautiful!! The interaction between Buffy and William is so sweet and innocent but at the same time sensual and desperate....I'm am in awe. I love this story. Please, please, please update soon, no pressure though, I just can't wait for more!!!!
person Thia
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am practically sixteen again! WOW! is is sooo good. I'm nailed down in this chair! You've done such a marvelous job on this, sweety.. WOW.. All those feelings.. the sweet and beautiful memories are coming back to me.. Thank you for writing this beautiful piece.. awww first love, young love.. is always the best! *hugs* Write more, soon, please?
person Jessica
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely adorable so far! I love it. Keep it going.
person patty
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your feedback. And don't apologize for not liking Angel. I don't much care for him either, although
I preferred him to Riley (who really makes me yak!) and I don't mind him on his own show. I just didn't want him
with Buffy. So, I never, never write about him with Buffy. I am Spuffy all the way and always will be. You guessed it, there will definitely be a fight down the road aways between them and you must know that size doesn't
necessarily count for anything. This is my first AU and I'm really enjoying writing it because I feel so much more
freedom to take the characters anywhere I choose without being accused of not having them "in character" One
of the things I do not do, no matter what anyone thinks, is write about him in a way that does a disservice to the
character. That's why, in this fic, I gave him money and position far above anything Angel will ever have. In my
other many chaptered fic, Caught Between Two Lovers. he's still a vamp and Buffy's still a slayer, but I've
changed the circumstances of their first meeting to suit me, and I've once again provided him with the proper
means to live well as he courts the slayer. Family money was inherited and a lot of interest has built up over the
past hundred years. Anyway, I'm glad everyone seems to be liking the story. It has a ways to go yet, so stick
with me, and I'll try to make it worth your while.......Pattyanne
person Azrielle
schedule October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was AWES! Az!