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for Sweet Sixteen

by patty

person Kel
schedule November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love all your fics, so please keep writing.

This reminds me of what it was to be young and in love and is fun!
person Azrielle
schedule November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent as always!! Please add more soon.
person Anon
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i love the way this story is growing stronger and stronger....just like young frist love...i loved been sixteen and this is bringing it all back to me...thanks and keep writing
person vicann
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
For your first AU you are really doing a great job. I have loved everything else you have written, and Sweet Sixteen has lived up to my expectations. You really have got the mood of first love, I'm just hoping that this one will also be last love.
person JenIsLikeWoah
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice fict....haven't finished it but I really am enjoying it! :) Keep up the good work.
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
God you make me feel like a teenager with this story, not an easy feat. Excellent job.
person Hannah
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! Please, Please, more soon!! Thanks!!
person Anon
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
"Remember how desperate it was? How you
couldn't wait to be together, and how the whole world
was going to stop until you saw each other again? I
remember nights when I was certain I was just going
to die before I saw my 'sweet sixteen' boyfriend again.) "

And with those words, you capture the very heart of the original Buffy show. In the original, right about now would be when some Zuthryl demon or something would crawl out of the wood work to try and kill Buffy...just so that 'I'm going to die before I see him again' feeling became reality. what are YOU going to do?

hehe. Consider it a challenge, or a suggestion. Thematically speaking.
person shell
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please keep writin!!! im really liking this story first love {sigh} lol
person Anon
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
fab..fab..fab...more...more...more