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for Sweet Sixteen

by patty

person sammygirl
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i have to say that i love that fan fic acly ily in all fairness i love all your fics but this one is soooo cute they're sooooooooooooooo in love!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i cant wait till william tells buffy the whole story and to how she reacts please update soon!

love ya
sam
xxx
person T
schedule November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this just made my day. i'm suddenly full of giggles and happiness. sigh, i cant wait for the next chapter. this is wonderfully fun!
person mercy
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
After reading that last chapter, I'm very hungry, Good power of discription. Please update ASAP. Now I have to go and see if I can find some chocolate cake. ha ha!
person slayersgift@aol.com
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was a cute chapter. Hoping there will be more. Soon. That and Blue Eyed Devil. You have me hooked. You bad girl.
person LadyLiz
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOL!!!! "So good it almost made up for the snails." Poor Buffy! LOL! I feel so bad for the girl. I wouda had her reaction to the food too. Please update again very soon. I'm hanging on every word!
person stef
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good...............I really like all of your stories............keep up the good work..................and keep on posting more chapters................ I really look forward to new chapters and stories by you.............


Stef : )
person Jen
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for continuing this story! I love it...it's so sweet and romantic :) Keep up the good work! Jen
person Livia
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ohh I absolutley love this story. I can't wait for more chapters. It is so sweet. I'm excited to see how she reacts to his news, which I hope is coming soon. So update soon. I love it.
person Katie
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*is still bawling her eyes out* I hope you're happy...I haven't cried this much since I lost MY first love. I remember everything, went through the exact same emotions and feelings. This was only last year, too! I'm an 18-year old college freshman now. I just.....wow, love is such a powerful emotion. It completely consumes you, and just...okay, I have to stop reviewing before I start crying again. Oops, too late....

Don't feel bad, though, please! Your story is excellent, and it makes me remember all the good times I had with my first love. By the way, where did you get those songs from? They fit the story perfectly.

All I have to say is, just, wow....there really is no praise high enough to be given for this story. 10/10, 5 stars out of 5 stars A+++++++++

*grabs fifth box of tissues she's gone through*

Keep writing, and if you ever get any flames, let me know. I'll take carethemthem. Later days, babe!!!

Much love,
Katie
person Anon
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow...thanks for all the kind words. Here's a partial list of the songs I've used.

1. You're Sixteen
2. Sweet Sixteen
3. Sweet Little Sixteen
4. Happy Birthday sweet Sixteen
5. Sixteen Candles

6. Young Love/air supply
7. Young Love/Outfield
8. Too Young
9. Hold me, Thrill Me, Kiss Me
10. Old Fashioned Love Song

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