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for Sweet Sixteen

by patty

person Kate
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that is just so freaking beautiful! I can't get over how beautifully you write. I think it is so sweet that they are both virgins. Everything they experience will be even more beautiful.
person Annette
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aw, it's so sweet and nice that they get to explore and learn together. *sigh*
person Kimber
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Patty

Oh, my... how you have captured the interplay of first time, with a sensual erotic touch that makes you truly belief this is the real thing......I can't wait for more.....so I hope your little fingers are typing away on this and other adventures you have us sitting on the edge of our seats for.......


Kimber
person Samolly
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy you are updating this story!!! I love it! More please!!!
person lolita
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Girl that was highly unfair, as a huge fan of yours I would plead that you continue with this story - I love it soo much.

I like AU's they are always good, and I also love the fact that in this story the two love each other with no angsty pasts no badness just pure love, I love that you write so that they have an easy, sweet loving relationship. Heck I just love it all.

Please continue with this ASAP.

Lita
person Jen
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn you for not writing more! Please update soon!
person Nicky
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Really loving your story. I'm glad it took this long for anything serious to happen, because nobody ever waits on this site! :D
Everyone is in bed by the second chapter!

Ok, ok, so i'm over exagerating (and i can't exactly talk, my story opens with Spike and Buffy in bed!)...but still...

Nicky
person misha
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ohhh! i need more! i like these characters even more than the ones on tv! is willow ever going to be a part of the story?
person karen
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awe! That's all I have to say.
person October
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hope you update soon, these loooooooooooong pauses are really ...mean. :)