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for Sweet Sixteen

by patty

person white rabbit
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
At last...your a goddess among fan fic writers...i loved your update with a big WOW...can't wait for his turn!! Back to ing ing ...please...please more updates sooooon. thanks
person Hannah
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Incredible as usual!! I'm so happy that you updated this one, it's been awhile! Please, please update soon!!
person dakota
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!! he is sooo sweet. i wish the guy i liked would be like that to me. william is so patient and kind, please write more soon. i anticipate the next xhapters. thank you for writing
person ILoveKyle
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Please hurry and write another chapter. I am dieing to know if Giles walkes in on them or not.
person tracy
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
excellent
i am loving this story
it is so sweet!
keep it up
person tasha
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this story is amazing ive been following it since it was fist posted. i think you're a brilliant author 2 be able 2 write such amazing characters.i cant wait utill the next update
person white rabbit
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very, very sweet...bulikelike that it's getting hotter...please update soon
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Can't wait for the next part. You've left yourself ALL kinds of possibilities with the way this last part ended. Hope to see a new part soon!
person lolita
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww I like that idea too - that they'll be teaching each other everyg, tg, that's such a sweet idea. ;)
person Nicky
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You know, this is possibly the sweetest story getting submitted here right now. I just hope it all goes well. We all know sex between two virgins can be embarassing and wierd. Two people fumbling around, unsure where to put what or what to do once they put it there.

Just for this story...please let it go alright. I don't think your readers could bare an embarassing first-time scene between these two sweet, innocent (though not for long im guessing) lovers.

So...lets have some happy, pleasurable, unfumbly sex when the time comes.

Thank you

Nicky