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for Sweet Sixteen

by patty

person Kendall
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OHH this story ROCKS!!!!!! please continue!!!!! :)
person C.B
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Library Sex! Library Sex! PLEAAAASSSSEEEE! Big time fantasy of mine. Used to work in one, but my boy-toy at the time was too big a pansy. Please let me live vicariously through thi Lo Lovin' the fic overall, btw.
person lovesbitca37
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I just thought I'd tell you just how much I love this story. It's almost the only one where it doesn't just rush straight into sex, but gives us loads of steamy build ups and I love it tat takes me back to my sweet sixteen! Please keep writing!
person stef
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please please please!!!!! continue. This is the best first love story ever. I can't wait for the rest!!!!
person E.F.
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Evil, evil girl! Cutting it off like that! :) {You can't see me, but I'm bowing to worship at your feet right now}
person Arch
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to speak up. I've been reading from the beginning, and love the way the story's going. Keep it up!
person Shelby
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please, do update soon. I'm in love with your story. So please, update!!!
-Shelby
person Kris
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I luv this story and I cannot wait to read more.:)
person tasha
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i loved the new approach. not as erotic but still good
person Jessica
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you are incredible! That chapter took a LONG time, though!!! I just hate it when you leave me hanging! :) Keep up the good work!