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February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol NOOOOOOOOO Graham Cracker! loll. mwahahaha.
Other than the insaneness at the end - lol - Great chapter, as usual, a fantastic story, it really has anything - you got skills. :)
Please continue with this as soon as you can and I must say I really truly appreciate the long chapters!
Other than the insaneness at the end - lol - Great chapter, as usual, a fantastic story, it really has anything - you got skills. :)
Please continue with this as soon as you can and I must say I really truly appreciate the long chapters!
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see more of this story, Dawn is a little freak isn't she, so manipulative and dark - I don't think that anyone's gone there with her character before so good job!
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February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok. I never really liked Dawn all that much anyways but OH MY GOD! She isnt even embarassed! She almost raped Spike! She must be stopped!
DOWN WITH DAWN!
DOWN WITH DAWN!
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Spike... and poor Buffy. Dawn's such a manipulative little shit. And I was wondering where the whole thing with her masturbating to their porno woingoing.
And kudos, Paganbaby, the attempted rape scene was convincingly frightening, which muave ave been twice as hao wro write with a girl forcing herself on a guy (who theoretically is stronger than her).
And kudos, Paganbaby, the attempted rape scene was convincingly frightening, which muave ave been twice as hao wro write with a girl forcing herself on a guy (who theoretically is stronger than her).
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter but I think Lila should come back and they should make some more movies.
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hahahallyally funny with dawn going all phsyco =)
good thing that this isn't RL cause then it would have been mayorly fucked.... If I was spike I woudn't have
cared that it was a girl, she would have gotten a smack to the head.
good thing that this isn't RL cause then it would have been mayorly fucked.... If I was spike I woudn't have
cared that it was a girl, she would have gotten a smack to the head.
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February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Alright, who else here wants to smack Dawn upside the head? Raise your hands. Geez, if a guy did to a girl what she did to Spike, he could go to jail for sexual assault. I wouldn't be as forgiving if I were Spike or Buffy. I hope Dawn has to pay some type of consequencGreaGreat chapter, PB.
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February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohh. I think Dawn could get pregnant doing that, if Spike had any spermall all on his penis.
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February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD i just read the latest chapter it was great i thought it was so funny poor Spike this story is still my favourite and i beg ya please keep going