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November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Part 16
This was so great! Hot as Hell as usual but also VERY funny especially at the end with the 'goats' comment and the finger giving.
Also, can't wait for them to start filming the 'vampire layer' films.
God do I love this series!
Sarah
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This was so great! Hot as Hell as usual but also VERY funny especially at the end with the 'goats' comment and the finger giving.
Also, can't wait for them to start filming the 'vampire layer' films.
God do I love this series!
Sarah
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November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank God! So glad you updated. I had cold sweats thinking this might not be updated for a while. Please keep it coming(or cuming)! Heee!
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November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
more please?
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November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay...that was seriously hot. Damn. You didn't disappoint at all with that 4some. I'm personally fine with them extending their sexual circle as much as possible. There are lots of fics that depict a morinstinstream, committed Spuffy relationship...I was drawn to this fic for fun, raunchy, unconventional Spuffy (plus others).
I thought your dialogue and narration were really on in this chapter. It was snappy and fun and made me laugh several times. I enjoyed the phone call with Dawn, who you actually made kind of cute and likeable. Loved her line "it's not like I went to the video store with dark sunglasses and a trenchcoat." And I liked Buffy being confronted with the fact that people she knows are probably going to see her films, since she strangely hasn't seemed to give that much thought. I never got the slightest impression from you that Dawn was going to join in on the fun, because I agree with shippy, that'd be ewww. I also liked when they kept talking about how "reptilian" the Mayor seems. Hee. I'm a sucker for those little references to the show. Anyway, great chapter, I loved it.
I thought your dialogue and narration were really on in this chapter. It was snappy and fun and made me laugh several times. I enjoyed the phone call with Dawn, who you actually made kind of cute and likeable. Loved her line "it's not like I went to the video store with dark sunglasses and a trenchcoat." And I liked Buffy being confronted with the fact that people she knows are probably going to see her films, since she strangely hasn't seemed to give that much thought. I never got the slightest impression from you that Dawn was going to join in on the fun, because I agree with shippy, that'd be ewww. I also liked when they kept talking about how "reptilian" the Mayor seems. Hee. I'm a sucker for those little references to the show. Anyway, great chapter, I loved it.
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November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I don't agree with Anon and k, I loved that BS sweetness which in no way deterred from the smut. But what I didn't like was in chap 14 Dawn's involvement. I hope you're not thinking of Spike and Buffy getting it on with her!!! granted she's too young, but i 'd hate to see it happen in three or four years time when she is of age. What I don't get is why they keep extending their sexual circle I thought Buffy and Spike would remain together outside work albeit for the occasional "guest", at this rate they'll never be together or what I fear most won't acknowledge any boundaries and where's commitment in all that?
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November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I agree with "Anon"...they are a bit *too* sweet together. But it was still good. I can't wait for the 4some. :)
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November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was great!! I hope that you will continue this story. You are a wonderful writer.
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November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure this is your best chapter.
Buffy and Spike are very saccharine together. Song lyrics are very cliche.
Maybe we can get more of that edge back from your earlier chapters? You've got promise.
Buffy and Spike are very saccharine together. Song lyrics are very cliche.
Maybe we can get more of that edge back from your earlier chapters? You've got promise.
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November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn! That was a HOTT chapter!! I love this story! I've gotta tell you , I've never liked Cordelia as much as I'm liking her in this story. I don't know what it is. Anyway, continue soon. Please!
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November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this story is freaking amazing! defintly going in the top 5 best PaganBaby stories. you have a perfect blance of slash & HET. written so well. so hott!