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for The All Nighter/part 4

by patty

person MarzBar
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice juicy Spuffy smut, Parts 1 through 4.
person lolita
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well I agree with you there, the car scene was too short, and it was gonna be good and hot too I could tell! lol. I do hope that you have or will write a story that follows on it's own from the car scene! :)

I liked the end part as well where he stays that was very sweet, I also liked the hot 'animal' scene - people that read reviews before the story are gonna get a completely different idea about that sentence. Don't worry people no beastilality here. lol
person Liz
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*blink* Muhhh........ Uhmm yeah you fried my brain. Oh so very hot. Can't wait to read your next fic!!!!
person Annette
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Was really enjoying the part in the car, but I guess I can forgive you for cutting it short since you are going to write another story, right? right?
person patty
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I've already started it. "My Boyfriend's Back" Part 1 is up. The reason I cut the scene in the car short was that
I had a sudden inspiration for a story where Buffy would actually be 16, and Spike just a little older. It's an
AU, since they're both human. One of those "first time" stories...
person ancientgirl
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
All parts were utterly delish!